The rosy red cheeks of the little children

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If you keep improving like this I'm going to officially commission you to paint me up a painting of my beautiful face before it falls apart due to the ravages of time.

I think you corrected the most serious flaw I saw in your other self-portrait...that being the lips. The other painting (I assume you know which one I'm talking about) featured gigantic black lips that went across about 75% of your face. It made you look a bit like a goth monster crossed with the actual Paige. It was weird. Don't get me wrong, though. It was a good likeness. I could tell it was supposed to be you, but I like this one a lot more.

How long does something like this take you?

Ah, yes, the Elvira lips. I hate(d) them, too. I try not to correct things I post on here, but I went over those black lips with a bit of gray and white before I posted the painting. And still I looked like some goth teen. Oh well. AIt doesn't matter as long as I'm getting better, right?

I am glad that you like the new self portrait. I was nervous that I had lost my chops. I am certainly rusty, but I am glad whatever meager talent I had before has not up and left while I was off pursuing foolish dreams of becoming a lawyer.

If you want a portrait, send me a picture. You'd have a decent turn-around time on receiving an original piece of art. This drawing took me three or four evenings (maybe 6 hours?). So not too long, and interestingly about as long as it takes me to reproduce a scribble.

If you want a portrait, send me a picture.

Hah, I can think of a couple reasons why that's not ever going to happen.

I hope it's because you're scared of how awesome the portait would turn out.
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Paige,

I think your self-portrait turned out really well (on many levels). First, choice of colors: (cheeks + lips + sweater) and (glass frame + neck area) flowing nicely. Second, the expression: even though you painted this with a loose style and few strokes, the expression in the face comes across as real/genuine. Third, the great challenge of drawing from life. I usually do o.k. when I am drawing from life but never from a mirror - it always ends up being a disaster (I am not sure why). For this reason, I am more impressed by this painting. Fourth, mix media: if you didn't disclose, I wouldn't have picked up on that until I examined the painting a little more, which is great. Great treatment of glasses (with white and green). Good job overall.

Take care,

AE.

Hi eebs! I love your daily doodles, so I am thrilled that you commented on this piece. I also really appreciate the thought and consideration you put into your comment. It reminds me of a much nicer version of commentary from my last art teacher, who was always giving me grief because of my "hasty" style.

I unfortunately don't have the luxury of drawing from life unless it's from a mirror. I've been doing it for years. My only consistent options for my art are a mirror or working from photographs and clippings. The only problem with drawing from a mirror is that I look upset because I'm concentrating so intently on my work.

Anyway, thank you! Your comment was extremely thoughtful, kind, and will definitely help me with my future art-making.

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